Friday, May 15, 2009

My ideal house

    "My ideal house"
          
         Today I will write about my ideal house. I have several things in my house. First it's a great location. It's location is on the mountain you can enjoy it there because there is a fresh air and a nice view. It's quiet all the time. It's a big, clean, and organized. Second I have in my house a big garden. You con farm anything. The fruit vegetable is very healthy.   

1 comment:

  1. Faisal
    This was your first paragraph - and it has many structural mistakes, but you do give a few specific details. A fair beginning.
    Bruce.

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