Monday, May 18, 2009
The differences weather
I'm from Saudi Arabia from Riyadh city. I'm living in Kamloops city now in canada. I would like to write about the different weather between my city Riyadh and Kamloops city. First I will write about the weather in my city. the weather there is usually hot, dry, and occasionally windy. In summer the temperature reaches to forty five degrees and the windy to be light. The rains is light too. In sum, the summer is very hot with dry in Riyadh city. In winter the temperature reaches to between fifteen to ten plus degrees. Sometimes reaches to below ten degrees. The windy is high and the rains is middle. In sum, the winter is very cold with moisture light in Riyadh city. In spring and fall the temperature reaches to between thirty to thirty eight degrees. The rains is middle and the windy to be high. In sum the weather in Riyadh city usually is hot three seasons only cold in the winter season with increases in the rains too in winter season. Second the weather in Kamloops city. It's very different about the weather in Riyadh city. The weather here in Kamloops is various. It's usually cold with moderation in the temperature degrees. In summer the temperature reacher to thirty six-thirty eight degrees. The rains is light but the windy to be middle. In winter the temperature reaches to between ten to minus ten degrees. There are plenty of snows with windy. The rain to be meddle In spring the temperature reachers to twenty five-twenty nine or thirty degree. The rains with windy to be middle. In fall the temperature reaches to thirty degree. The is very light but the windy to be high. In sum, the in Kamloops city is different in all the seasons. In conclusion the weather in Riyadh city is very different about it in Kamloops city.
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Faisal
ReplyDeleteMy first comment is to say congratulations for saying so much, but also to say write less, because you repeat a bit too much here. I will not comment on everything in yoru paragraph, but I will comment on a few things. First of all kamloops - is just that - you don't need 'city."
Also you need to simplify your description of Riyadh weather. Describe all the features of each season inistead of going back and forth.
Don't confuse the noun - wind - with the adjective - windy.
Be sure all of your sentences havea subject adn a verb - or they may not be sentences.
I will explain some more specific errors in class.
Bruce.